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sunhawk16 ([personal profile] sunhawk16) wrote2008-08-09 11:00 pm

Last of the spam... a bit of a 'tease' of my own...

Well, I feel somewhat lame here with my dinky little four posts, but I'm tossing in the towel and headed for bed! Last post is going to be kind of a tease though. ^^;
See, one of these days, when Ion is done, I plan on dishing out a random series of what I've come to think of in my head as 'Ion Vignettes'... kind of modeled after Plaid's BFB ii kibarashi. They'll just be little shorts from different POVs and since one of them actually decided to write itself this week, I thought I would share.
Just a musing from Heero....




He’s getting frustrated. I can see the little hint of a frown beginning to form, and he’s sighed three times in the last five minutes. Something about the picture he’s working on isn’t cooperating. He’ll look up at me soon, and ask me some question. I’ll need to stop watching him before he does. Need to not let him catch me with that look on my face, or he’ll just laugh at me and call me ‘besotted’.

Not that it isn’t completely true, but it will make him forget the picture and we’ll end up doing something else instead. And I don’t want that. He’s close to finishing and I want to be here watching when he does. I don’t often get to witness that moment of ‘done’, but I’ve learned to tell when those moments are close and that frown of frustration is usually the first sign. If he sticks with it… he’ll work through that stumbling point soon and then I’ll get to see that other expression.

It doesn’t last long before it fades into the one that doubts, but for just a minute, his eyes will be full of this glow of… accomplishment. His old confidence will be solid and alive in his expression, a hint of that rebelliousness somehow mixed in there. Like he’s thwarted some evil power by completing the piece. That little, secret smile of satisfaction will be there and…

He will be beautiful. And whole…

He sighs again, a little more heavily and I look down at the book in my lap, feigning absorption in text I haven’t paid any attention to in over an hour.

‘Heero,’ he asks absently. ‘why the hell do goldfish have eyes that look like marbles? Doesn’t it seem kind of… not very safety conscious?’

‘A design flaw?’ I quip, keeping my focus on my book, making sure he thinks I’m not at all ready to turn in for the night. He snorts in reply and then stretches his arms wide, making his back pop.

‘I’m gonna get a soda, do you want anything?’ he asks before standing to go to the kitchen.

‘No thanks,’ I reply. ‘I’m good.’

I turn a page while he’s gone, not caring if it’s forward or backward, and smile to myself in anticipation.

It won’t be long now…

[identity profile] rogue53.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 03:16 am (UTC)(link)
*squeals loudly and copies to new file* Yea! Ion vignette! Any Ion is good Ion! Have a nice night!

[identity profile] sunhawk16.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 03:44 am (UTC)(link)
*snorts* It's like chumming the waters, isn't it? ^o^

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[identity profile] merith.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 03:18 am (UTC)(link)
oh sunny! you are such a tease. :)

and i do so know the temptation of giving voice to others... letting them tell just a little bit of their side.

this is great! i love hearing heero's voice here, and how he sees duo in that moment. it would be hard to reconcile himself to seeing the complete duo at and only for that moment, then to find him not in the next. of course, being there for duo is what ion heero lives for, so maybe it's not so hard?

lovely regardless. ♥

[identity profile] sunhawk16.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 03:46 am (UTC)(link)
This has been the hardest series to write once it decided to run so long. SO much stuff that would be easier to deal with, if I was switching POVs sometimes. I don't think these will be any huge deal, but it will be fun to show some series moments from other angles. ^^;
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[personal profile] merula31 2008-08-10 03:20 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, you and Plaid are horrible with these teases!!

This is lovely- *sighs happily*

[identity profile] sunhawk16.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 03:46 am (UTC)(link)
Oh yes, Mistress of the Cliff... we are just SO horrible! ^o^

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[identity profile] pellsfan.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 03:46 am (UTC)(link)
The idea of Heero's POV in Ion is marvelous. Actually 'anyone's' POV is great if it means a continuation of this wonderful world. Thanks and sweet dreams.

[identity profile] sunhawk16.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 03:48 am (UTC)(link)
I have a bunch of little nagging ideas for certain spots through the series where I think it would be nice to see things from somebody else's POV. I don't think they'll all be from Heero's POV, but we'll see. Just... really need to finish the actual series first. >_>

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[identity profile] nitelyfe.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 03:47 am (UTC)(link)
TEASE! *shakes* More Ion!!! XD

[identity profile] sunhawk16.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 03:49 am (UTC)(link)
*grin* Your icon just totally cracked me up! ^o^

[identity profile] klingonpoo.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 03:53 am (UTC)(link)
This is wonderful and a great idea! I like seeing Heero's POV. I look forward to more of these after you finish the series. Thanks Sunhawk! *hugs*

[identity profile] sunhawk16.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 01:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes, the series needs to wrap up first, I think, before I try to go inserting too many of these! :P

[identity profile] rurounitriv.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 04:09 am (UTC)(link)
I like! And I'm rereading Ion yet again, so the timing is perfect. XD

[identity profile] sunhawk16.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 01:20 pm (UTC)(link)
There are several places where it was kind of a pain not being able to show 'the other side', so it will be nice to get those out later. ^____^
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[identity profile] yanagi-wa.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 04:20 am (UTC)(link)
Ooooo, Ion. A little bit, but a little is better than none. Just perfect. I get the same feeling myself. A well written chapter that I know has jelled right. Soo good. Thanks.

[identity profile] sunhawk16.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 01:21 pm (UTC)(link)
I just wish this current chapter would jell more and... smoosh less. O.o It's being a pain, and is kind of more like pudding than jello... o.O;;

[identity profile] mechante-fille.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 04:27 am (UTC)(link)
Ah, I knew it! All this talk of 'done with Ion soon,' pshaw! You will NEVER BE DONE WITH ION, BWAHAHAHAHA!!

Ahem. Lovely peek into Heero's brain, m'dear. Thank you!

[identity profile] sunhawk16.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 01:22 pm (UTC)(link)
*sigh* You're probably right. Though these don't really count, see, because they will stay within the framework of the series, once it's done. *pets shiny logic* ^_____^
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[personal profile] starr_falling 2008-08-10 04:43 am (UTC)(link)
Ooooh, nice. ^_^ Ion Heero needs more time out to play me thinks!

[identity profile] sunhawk16.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 01:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Just here and there... the trick with these is going to be keeping them to embellishments, and not letting Heero run away with it! ^o^

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[identity profile] lavendarlizard.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 05:23 am (UTC)(link)
And Ion Trowa and Quatre and Wufei and Sally and Relena and... heh... maybe even Zechs. *snork!*

[identity profile] sunhawk16.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 01:24 pm (UTC)(link)
And the barkeep guy and the waitress and Neo and Fuzzybutt... Bwhahahahahaha!
Oh God... smack me. O.O

[identity profile] kiria-dk.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 06:04 am (UTC)(link)
You made me squeak when I saw this! Honest-to-god squeak! It was a squeak of absolute glee, I assure you. This was lovely. Besotted, indeed. *rolls in the Ion-ness*

BTW, I friended you a while back and I think I forgot to tell you.

[identity profile] sunhawk16.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 01:25 pm (UTC)(link)
No problem, I am a wide-open friending type. ^_____^ Now if the real next chapter would cooperate as nicely as this little thing did, we'd be getting somewhere! ^o^

[identity profile] sunhawk16.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 01:25 pm (UTC)(link)
*grin*

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_sianna_/ 2008-08-10 06:39 am (UTC)(link)
Omg omg omg! ION!!! *hibble*

Oh, this is just so beatiful! And I always wanted to know how exactly Heero experiences certain situations. :D

Feel free to post another one whenever it decides to write itself! ;)

[identity profile] sunhawk16.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 01:26 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm trying to keep them reined in until the series is wrapped up, because I'm kind of afraid of getting tangled up in my own plot lines! ^o^ But I have lots of ideas!

[identity profile] riceball05.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 07:03 am (UTC)(link)
YAY! ION! It's not ION Ion but it's still something! Heero is so cute. I can't wait for more Ion Arc though. *hint hint wink wink*

[identity profile] sunhawk16.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 01:27 pm (UTC)(link)
It's 'Ion Lite'! ^o^ I'm workin' on it... I'm workin' on it! ^__~

[identity profile] soriano76.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 08:16 am (UTC)(link)
Well any Ion is a good Ion, but I would like something a little more chapter like. Kisses.

[identity profile] sunhawk16.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 01:28 pm (UTC)(link)
*snugs* You are SO hard to please! ^o^

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[identity profile] vhenkels.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 08:27 am (UTC)(link)
Ah, more Ion! Yay!! :-) Very nice scene though... you can feel how Heero loves Duo. Very nicely done. :-)

[identity profile] sunhawk16.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 01:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, he IS besotted! ^o^

*taps fingers*

[identity profile] yen420.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 08:37 am (UTC)(link)
Okay, this'll do. For the moment!!!! *looks meaningfully at you* But, *sighs* honestly, I'll take what I can get and this, with, finally, hearing Heero's thoughts in Ion, even though short... *saves it in ION folder*. Yeah.. See what you reduced me too *sniffs*.. Care to share anymore vignettes? Don't care if it's short. Just wanna see what Heero and Duo's doing right now. How about Feifei's? Sally once said Wufei envied Duo's talent but 'how' envious is he really? And oh, anymore Duo pictures from Wufei? You know, to add to Heero's collection ^______^

Kracken says to give you tea, biscuit, and a nice cozy place to sit so you could finish Ion since poking aint doing the trick no more >_>

[identity profile] sunhawk16.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 01:15 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm working on it! I'm woooooorking on it!
Current chapter is over a hundred and twenty pages. >_>
Though I have NO idea where this tea thing came from... Dew, damn it! I want Dew! Though I'll take those biscuits and the cozy. ^______^

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[identity profile] kracken.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 11:16 am (UTC)(link)
*Jumps up down and has Jon look at me like I'm nuts*

You know, Jon could take a hint from this ficlet. He's always leaning over, at bad times, and being critical, like... 'Did you want that to be that color, or did you think that color was some other color... because it's not." :P

[identity profile] sunhawk16.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 01:30 pm (UTC)(link)
I don't get it with the art, but I could just weep when I manage to get some writing time and something happens to mess it up, or I FINALLY get 'in the zone' and somebody interrupts. *chews on things* It's SO frustrating!
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[identity profile] kracken.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 11:18 am (UTC)(link)
So, do I call these IV's ? *laughs*

[identity profile] sunhawk16.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 01:31 pm (UTC)(link)
*dies laughing* It might save me from having to look up how to spell Vignette every time! ^o^

[identity profile] rochan01.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 03:44 pm (UTC)(link)
:-)
Nice to see a little of the Ion world from a different POV. I like that Heero's secretly observing and supporting while being all casual on the outside.

[identity profile] sunhawk16.livejournal.com 2008-08-11 01:21 am (UTC)(link)
Can't give himself away or Duo will just get all self-conscious and stop. ^___~

[identity profile] skylark92.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 04:24 pm (UTC)(link)
SSQQUUUEEAAALLLL!!! THIS WAS SUCH A GREAT SURPRISE!!! *MASSIVETACKLEGLOMPS* I LOVE YOUR POV WORK!!! LOOKING FORWARD TO THE FINISHED PRODUCT!! LOVE YA!

[identity profile] sunhawk16.livejournal.com 2008-08-11 01:22 am (UTC)(link)
I'm looking forward to it too... just wish it would cooperate! ^o^

[identity profile] waterlilylf.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 04:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, I LOVE this...absolutely love it. So nice to have a little peek into Heero's thoughts. Soooo besotted and trying so hard to hide it, and recognising Duo's need to get his picture finished.

Thank you so much.

[identity profile] sunhawk16.livejournal.com 2008-08-11 01:23 am (UTC)(link)
I think Heero was just getting tired of never having a say in the main series. *snerk*

[identity profile] eg06.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 05:01 pm (UTC)(link)
SQUEEEE!!! *flails* holy hell, it's ION!! XD and in Heero's POV?! that's a new one, definitely a new perpsective on Duo that we haven't seen in this Arc yet... I can't wait for more!

[identity profile] sunhawk16.livejournal.com 2008-08-11 01:23 am (UTC)(link)
Don't know that there will be too many of these until the main series is done, but I definitely have a few ideas. ^^;

[identity profile] tkmaxwell777.livejournal.com 2008-08-11 03:45 am (UTC)(link)
*squee* MORE ION! *does happy MORE ION dance* What a nice little viggy to help with us be able to wait more patiently for more of the main story. *huggles* That was really cool. I love how Heero just KNOWS Duo so well. *sighs* So romantic. Of course, Hubby's response was, "Why couldn't he be drawing a picture of a puppy... or an alligator snapping turtle?" *rolls eyes* Yeah, rather one-track minded isn't he? *lol* Thanks for sharing such a nice tidbit! Take all the time you need for Ion... it will be worth it when we read it (quit rolling your eyes at me and panicking! it WILL be just right... all of your writing is!) Now I shall retire so I can drag myself out of bed for work tomorrow then do some more packing once I get home... how could it have been so EASY for Heero and Duo to move in Ion?!? *glares* Oh well, two young men in good shape probably wouldn't have the same problems as a 35 year old woman and a 40 year old man *snerk* It's all about age, Dar~ling!

TK & Hubby (who are both just EXHAUSTED but still can't wait to move!)

[identity profile] sunhawk16.livejournal.com 2008-08-12 01:18 am (UTC)(link)
You crack me up; your comment was longer than the ficlet! ^o^
As for moving... the guys had the assistance of an author who didn't want to fart with it. *snicker*
And tell hubby to just imagine the pic was of a puppy playing in the fish pond. *snerk*

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